Saturday, October 31, 2015

Car Accident Story

This afternoon at 4:45 at car accident at the interception of First Street and Slaughter Lane involving 13 year old Roger Clementine and John Jacob Jingleheimer-Smith and his wife Melba who are 91 and 67.

"Everything was fine one second then all of a sudden theres two cars colliding together,"said a bystander.

According to police Smith and his wife were driving 10 miles per hour in the eastbound lane of Slaughter Lane going east while Clementine was driving 60 miles per hour also on the far eastbound lane of Slaughter Lane traveling west.

"This was a complete head-on collision that shouldn't have happened,"stated the local authorities.

Clementine was rushed by ambulance to University Medical Center Breckenridge and was treated for only minor injuries to his face before being released.

"He is lucky to be able to walk away from this accident with nothing more than minor cuts,"said local paramedics.

Smith and his wife were taken to the hospital were his wife was treated for a bloody noses and releases but Smith suffered from head injuries and is in a serious condition as of this evening.

"The family is hoping for the best at the time,"said a close family friend.

Clementine was driving a 1948 Studebaker that was his uncles and the car had only suffered a crumpled fender.

"It was a surprise to see that the car wasn't completely ruined,"said a officer.

Smith was driving a 1989 Yugo Firebelcher while his wife in the passenger seat and after the head-on collision the car was a total loss.

"Theres no way this car can be fixed completely," stated Dave, a local car expert.

The police cited Clementine for speeding and driving in the wrong lane, and for driving without a license.

"This was accident that could have been prevented and hopefully Clementine doesn't try to do this again,"said the Austin Police Chief.


CE 2.1

1. The tickets could be a potential conflict of interest.
2. He is trying to send the message that lawmakers are only caring about the NRA.
3. He fears for his safety because of the famous carry law.
4. Amazon unveiled a new online marketplace that features handmade items from austin artisans.
5. It was rated so high because of the new features and designs.

Long Answers

1. I think that this industry has such good growth because it meets the costumers own terms and its easier and faster to get goods to the costumers. This industry has good growth because its efficient for the costumers to save their own time and it connects more with the new technology. I also think that people don't want to have to wait in traffic to get items that they can just get delivered to them instead.
2. My family will sometimes uses amazon to deliver goods to us because we don't always have time to got o a store and find stuff. My family doesn't use it to deliver food at all because we would rather pick out our food at a store but my mom uses it if we need a book or clothes that we cant't find at the stores. I sometimes use amazon to order my friends a gift or present because I can get stuff done faster.
3. I think that this industry has been targeted by ''Millennials" because its a easier and faster for them to get stuff done. I also think that people don't want to have to wait in traffic to get what they need and this industry meets their demands faster and saves them the time. I believe that people find it easier to skip the stores because online costumers can narrow everything down to find exactly what they were looking for.
4. I don't think I would use this services on a regular basis in the future because I prefer to physically get stuff done rather than online. The reason I prefer this is because I don't like having to go through the shipping fees or the slow loading of a computer and I like being able to get out of my house. I believe  that I would use the service sometimes but its not something I would like to do everyday to get something when I could just go to the store and buy it there without having to wait for it to be delivered.

Friday, October 23, 2015

CE 2.2

1. Two potential causes of the fire is a farm accident and someone intentionally voluted the burn ban.
2. According to the man who nominated him for a Grammy, he was nominated because of how he interacts with students.
3. Lewis Hamilton is the favorite to win the F1 race to be held in Austin at the Circuit of America this weekend.
4. Ginger Gold, Honeycrisp, Jonagold, and McIntosh.
5. Good dark chocolate, Wild rice, and Real Vanilla.

Long Answers
1. No my parents nor I have purchase a textbook to compensate for the digital version I have accress to. Although we have thought of buying one due to me not being able to flip back in forth as fast on a device than a textbook. I have always liked the actual textbook compared to the online one because sometimes its harder to access one online and not as easy to use. Even with have a digital device and being able to access it more often then carrying around a textbook I still find it better to have a textbook at home because then I could not get frustrated if my device isn't working.
2. I think that not having a textbook have hurt my grades a little because in Pre AP Geography we have to sometimes use the online textbook to finish a assignment and it doesn't always work. The online textbook was hard and confusing to navigate and it took a long time just to find a page that I needed. I think if I had a textbook at home it would have saved me so much time and I could have gotten all the information needed for the assignment and that would have not hurt my grade as much.
3. I think that gong all digital has not been a good decision because not everybody has the access to a device like others do. I think that even though it might seem more efficient online textbook are not as easy to use and make students to dependent on their devices to get work down instead of getting them use to using textbooks tat they will have to get for colleges. Also textbooks are easy to find information on then having to wait for a device to load the the pages.
4. I think that this trend is going to continue in the United States because due to the new generation of technology schools and districts will continue to try and keep up with the technology updates. As technology becomes more and more useful more and more school things will be moved from paper to being online to save the amour go paper printed and the amount of time it takes. Even though thus trend all continue i think tat schools and districts should still give students access to textbooks to keep at home because not everyday has access to devices like others.
5. I think schools and distracts decided to do away with textbooks because it saves the schools and districts money. I think that this also save amount of space in classrooms and gives the students the chance to uses their devices more often instead of just staring at a textbook all day. Also they decided to do away with textbooks to save the amount of paper used to make textbooks and make it earlier for students have carry around instead of carrying around textbooks all day.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Opinions Writing Practice Activity

Title- Student sharing, too much change or great opportunity?
1. Editorial
2. The story was about the opinion on FIT and how it effects students and teachers.
3.  Their direct opinion on FIT was favoring FIT and having extra time to work on homework but thinks their are a couple things that are unfair about it. "While I think we should have FIT everyday, I don't think that FIT is more valuable than actual class time."-Quote
4. Yes they did address the other side of the FIT because they describe how FIT is beneficial to students who use the time wisely they also describe how they students should of gotten a voce in the decision and the unfair way its being enforced.
5. I don't think that their writing was wishy-washy because even though they do bring up the topic of how class is more important then FIT two times the second time the writer agrees with what they said earlier. "While that's valid because again, class time is more valuable than FIT, I think that shorter class times are worth the extra 30 minutes of study time."-Quote
6. There are no quotes in this story.
7. They wrote in 1st person point of view.

Title- The office welcomes the dawn of the technology age
1. Kelsie Stella, Staff Writer
2. Their story is about the new system in the office that moves documents like the V.O.E online to the website to make it easier for students to access the document.
3. Their opinion on the new technology in the office is easier and more efficient for students and parents. "I think that moving towards more a technology-based system for these two documents, especially at a school like this, is going to prove to be extremely successful." -Quote
4. They did address the other side of the new technology by describing that not all students are able to access the internet so instead they have to get the documents from the office or get it on the library computers.
5. Their opinion wasn't wishy-washy because they didn't go back and change their opinion on the new technology. " The office will still carry hard copies of both these things or they will advice you to go to the library and access the documents from one of their computers." -Quote
6. There are no quotes in this story.
7. They wrote in 2nd of view in till the end then they change into 1st person point of view at the very end.

Title- I scream, you scream...
1. Nya Martin, Staff Writer
2. Their story was about the type of food poisoning four in some Blue Bell ice cream that caused three deaths.
3. Their opinion on the food poisoning from Blue bells once cream is that the company is responsible for the deaths of the people who were effects by it and that Blue Bell had returned way to soon.
4. the writer did show a little of the other said when they talked about how everybody makes mistakes but then went on to explain that theses mistakes could have been prevented.
5. They were not wishy-washy in their opinion because they stayed focused on how this is Blue Bells fault.
6. There were not any quotes in this story.
7. The writer wrote in 1st point of view throughout the while story.

The problems with pep rallies 
1. Annika Holm, Commentary Editer
2. The story is about whats wrong with the prep rallies and what could be fixed to help improve the prep rallies.
3. "...The way pep rallies aren't doing anyone any good."-Quote
4. They did show the what the other side might think about this at the very beginning.
5. The writer wasn't wishy-washy about their opinion because they said whist was wrong and then continuing explaining what they could have done instead to make it better.
6. There are not any quotes in this story.
7. They uses 3rd point of view though out the whole story.

Emotional learning effective?
1. Melissa Weprin, Staff Writer
2. The story is about how fresh am are taught emotional learning skills in their world geography but it is taught in a way that is not effective for students.
3. "I believe the way the skills are being taught makes them ultimately unmemorable and unhelpful."-Quote
4. They did show what the other side might think as bout it but explained what could be done to improve it.
5. The writer wasn't wishy-washy in their opinion because they stayed focused on how it should be taught.
6. There are not any quotes in this story.
7. The writer wrote in 1st person point of view though out the whole story.

A call for athletic equality
1. Amaya Marquez, Staff Writer
2. The story is about how there are sports teams at school that don't get as much attention and are represented as "clubs" instead of sports teams like lacrosse.
3. "I definitely feel like we should get just as much attention just like the other sports."-Quote
4. They didn't show what the other side might think about this.
5. The writer wasn't wishy-washy in their opinion because the stayed focused on what should be down about this.
6. There are not any quotes in this story.
7. The writer wrote in 1st person point of view though out the whole story.

A. Some major difference is that opinion stores the writer uses worlds like "I" and "me" while news stories do not. News stories are facts while opinion writing is what the writer thinks. Also news stories uses quotes while opinion stories do not.
B. I don't think there are very many photos on this pages cause its what the writer thinks.
C. I think that three things that would be good to write a opinion piece on is how cancer doesn't just effect the patient it effects the people around them, the effect technology has on children, what tv does to children's brains.






Monday, October 19, 2015

Earthquake Story

Who- Residents of San Francisco's Bay .
Where- San Francisco Bay.
What- Earthquake rocked area.
When- Monday Morning at 8:12a.m.
Why- Strong earthquake in area.

Story

 Monday morning at 8:12a.m a earthquake rocked the San Francisco's Bay area and caused collapsed McHenrys Auto supplies resulting in injuries and deaths.

"A building housing McHenry's Auto Supply at 2342 Plum St. partially collapsed, killing two people and injuring six others," said Jennifer Vu, a public information officer from Hayward Fire department.

While in the apartment just across the street from the collapsing building was resident Mike Beamer explained that he felt the room moving and rolling when the earthquake hit.

"I dove under the table just as I heard an explosion outside and a chunk of cement flew through my kitchen window. That's when the screaming start from across the street,"said Mike Beamer.

Huntington Story

Who- A 53 year old named Janice Jones.
Where- Motor home parked on Beach boulevard near Highway 1.
What- Her dog knocked over her 9 mm handgun off a seat and it shot through her leg.
When- Wednesday at 10p.m.
Why- The weapon was discharged when it hit the floor.
How- The dog knocked it over.


Story

 Around 10p.m on Wednesday Janice was at the back of her motor house parked on Beach boulevard when her dog had knocked her 9 mm handgun off a chair causing the weapon to discharge and shot Janice in her leg as it hit the ground.
  Jones was transported by ambulance to Huntington Beach Hospital where she was treated before moving to Irvine Medical Center.

   "It could have been worse,"reporter Rye said." The bullet hit two inches from the gas tank."

  The dog that belonged to Janice is a Pomeranian named Tombo and was moved to the care of Huntington Beach Animal Control officers. The officers found a fresh cigarette burns on the dogs forehead.

" It could have done with a little less abuse and a few more pork chops,"animal control officer Janet Ngo said.

  Animal abuse charges against Janice Jones are being explored by the animal control offices along with possible charges involving the gun accident being filled against her by the country's district office.

"Jones doesn't have a gun a permit for the gun," said Rye.




Monday, October 5, 2015

The Big Day

   A man dressed for in a suit heads fast down a long road to get somewhere.While off in the distance a bride in a beautiful white wedding dress is getting ready for her wedding but has a distance look on her face. Its as if she's waiting for someone. As the man gets closer and closer he can't help but speed  in desperation to get somewhere important. The chapel doors start closing right as the man arrives in front of it. The wedding is cut off as the man rushes in stopping the wedding without a second thought and runs right in front of the suppose bride and groom. The look of desperation is clear in his eyes as he looks at the bride.
Who-John Martin, former boyfriend of soon to be bride Kim Hilton.
What- John drives a long way to crash Kim's wedding  
Where- Colorado
When- September 2, 2009
Why- In hopes of stopping her from getting married to the other guy.
How- By driving long distances in order to get to he Chapel


New story 

  Clouds covered the sky of Colorado on September 2, 2009, as a car driven by John Martin speeds down the long twisting roads. Time didn't seem to be on his side at the moment as he  desperately tried to make it to the wedding before its over. While off miles away Kim Hilton gets prepared for her big wedding day and she keeps on peeking out the window as if waiting for someone or something. Slowly the chapel doors start to closes as the wedding starts. Finally after much frustration traveling many miles John arrives right in front of where the wedding is located and doesn't hesitate to run inside. John stops right in front of where the bride and groom are standing and holds eye contact with  Kim, his ex girlfriend. And at that moment  its as if time freezes and its just the two of them in the room. The gasps of the brides and grooms friends and family brings John back to reality as tension fills the room. Its now or never Johns thought, its now or never to win back the girl he lost.



Thursday, October 1, 2015

Student of the Month Story

Student of the Month Story

  Last week, Bowie High School awarded the Student of the Month to Ellie Cemer for her huge involvement and hard work in school.

"Holy cow I can't believe I did this."

  Ellie Cemer felt as if she deserved receiving Student of the Month due to all the hard work she put into her homework and extra credit and is proud of what she accomplished.

"Its worth all the work because it gave me the ability to say that I can accomplish something through education"

According to the Ellie's Biology teacher to receive Student of the Month one has to have all A's, have school spirit, and must be involved in extra activities.

"Ellie did a lot of extra credit and stayed on top of her grades and she got all A's in all of her classes."

Some advice Ellie gives to students to become Student of the Month is to always do their best and to believe they can do it. And would like others to get the chance to receive this and hopes they have the same experience she had.

"I think it would be cool to win Student of the Month again, but I want others to become as happy as i am when they get the reward."

Receiving this reward motivated Ellie to become the best she can be and owes all her work to her family and friends for all their support for her and encourage her.

"I supported her by telling her to believe she can do it and told her how proud I would be in her even if she didn't win it."

When Ellie told her family and friends that she won Student of the Month she was so happy to their reactions to the news.

"I was so happy and proud of her that she received Student of the Month."

Even after all the work Ellie put into winning Student of the Month she explained that she was still very surprised because their was a lot of people doing just as much work  as she was doing.

"This means to me that hard work does pay off."

After finding out she won Student of the Month Ellie was given a medal and a certificate for all her work and believes that Student of the Month is a great idea for schools to keep doing.

"Every school should do this because the students will feel more inspired."
















CE 1.5

1. This would be a story in the newspaper because the clerk was in nationwide news and already had  a lot of attention so her meeting the Pope who is a leader was a big deal.
2. 20%
3. Affordable Care Act, climate change, and youth football.
4. Did not survey registered voters or likely voters like most political polls.
5. Tour championship winner and got $10 million and won the Masters with a record tying score.

Long Answers

1.  A wearable is technology  that you wear on your body. This is something that you notice on a commercial for the Apple Watch. This has become one of theses terms in technology that thats such a catch over the last couple of years.
2. This is something were seeing more and more often because the newer generation of wearables are more integrated to our body and is smaller. And many popular start ups are saying its now the Age of Wearable Gadgets. I think winces popular companies like Apple and Google are supporting Wearables its becoming more popular.
3. what appealed to me the most about Wearables is it being The Apple Watch because its a mice device to have. The Apple Watch appeals to me the most because its a device i can use for workouts and if i don't have my phone on me then i can have the watch.
4. I do think that we will be seeing Wearables more and more often in the future because as technology develops so does what we were involves to. I also thing that dominies will come up with more advance Wearables like the Apple Watch because peoples needs fro this device will increase in the future.
5. According to all the facts in the story I think that maybe in the future i will be wearing something like a type of Wearable similar to the Apple Watch because it could come in handy. I think this because as our generation grows the need fro new technology grows the same because the audience doesn't want the same old thing they want advancements.